I hear smacks and screams
I hear shouts of pain
I can hear the silent cries
Deep in her throat
Everything in her mind is calm
At ease
Except the congested part
Of memories from millenniums ago
I can feel the knot in her stomach
She feels twisted
And alone
I know she can read my mind
That's why I have to keep my thoughts to myself
And not share what I can see
Through those dark, shadowy eyes
Of that girl who haunts those who enter
and torture
I love how your poem has rhyming and it has alot of money. Great job Hallie :)
ReplyDeleteWooaahh...this totally gave me the chills. In a good way.:)
ReplyDeleteI love how passionate the poem sounds. I can tell that you really felt it and understood the painting. Like, seriously, you've got some heavy description going on there. Awesome job! :)
xoxo
Dimitri thanks! but i don't think i mention money...haha
ReplyDeletethai-- thank you! :)
I also agree with thai this was really good. It includes lots of details. (im going to use this post for the all star mentor week. if you dont mind.).
ReplyDeletethank you sabrina!
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